Read the sentence from an informative essay about globalization in china. pollution levels in beijing are improving in some ways thanks to government programs. what would most improve the sentence? adding facts and evidence removing ""in beijing"" adding clearer language removing ""in some ways""

Answer

Pollution levels in Beijing are improving thanks to government programs.

Q:What do we need to improve in the sentence? A:We need to improve by removing the phrase 'in some ways' to make it more clear.
Q:What would be the improved sentence? A:Pollution levels in Beijing are improving thanks to government programs.